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    August 06

    原创古体诗歌一首

    山水花鸟

                                      ——Steven Shi (Cicily Zhang抛的砖)

     

    山有木兮木有枝,

         心悦君兮君不知。

    水有鱼兮鱼有鳞,

         心念君兮君不临。

    花引蜂兮蜂采蜜,

         心盼君兮君难觅。

    鸟忧鸣兮鸣亦哀,

         心属君兮君不爱。

     

    注:“山有木兮木有枝,心悦君兮君不知”一句出自《越人歌》(之前写错了《越人歌》并非是诗经的一篇)的最后一句,颇觉很有feel,于是就接了几行拙劣之句。茶余饭后,消遣一笑罢了。

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    Hsin 冯wrote:
    那改成“心属君兮君不甩”····更押韵~~~~嘿嘿~或者“心系君兮君在外”~~~欧耶
    ~
    Aug. 10
    沛然 史wrote:
    看看~~~都误解我了,我这是在弘扬中华文化呢!!最后一个字要都要一样,所以最后一句只能白话一点了
    Aug. 9
    Hsin 冯wrote:
    最后一句太那个鱼目了···嘿嘿
    Aug. 8
    我说你怎么昨天突然问我八字怎么样了呢,原来你是发春了啊.哈哈
    Aug. 8
    JACKY GUOwrote:
    好诗!绝句啊! 充分表达了一个单身男人的内心世界。。。
    Aug. 7

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